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The Girl Who Went Through Dramatic, Changes In Her Life Chapter 2

 

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Hello, its been a while since I have released another chapter for this story. I am really sorry for the hold up to those who have read the first chapter. I have a lot going on right now as it won't come in yet. I'll let you know when things will be fine. This story is really hard to do as I chose to make an interesting one, to draw people in to read. I hope that you like the next chapter. Its a bit short but I promise it will get longer in words.



The Girl Who Went Through Dramatic, Changes In Her Life Chapter 2


Teal and her mother left the cemetery. There was no talking at that point. Both of them were in deep thinking, and thinking about how they will better their lives. Then Teals mother finally spoke, after a long time saying “Teal I know how all of this is hard for you……I believe there is something out there for you to adventure on. Why don’t you visit that tomato friend of yours? Maybe that will cheer you up. Now are you sure that you don’t want some dough?” “It’s copacetic mum, and no I don’t want any dough.” said Teal. Teal and her mother got back to town and onto the steam train, to get back home. Teal thought to herself “Mum is right maybe I should see a couple of my friends.” The journey didn’t take that long as they got back home. Teal saw a tomato figure person that looked familiar. It was her friend that she saw in town. Teals mother urge her to go and see her friend and she said “See you later at home have a whoopee time!”  Teal nodded her head and she called out “Hey Dorothy!” Dorothy turned around and her face brightened up. She replied back saying “Teal!!!!” Dorothy ran to where she was and gave her a big hug. Teal said to her * Your looking a live wire as usual, and spiffy as well. I forgot that you wear ritzy clothes*then Dorothy said *You slay me, that’s sad but, true.* Teal started to feel even more sad then Dorothy asked *Teal what’s eating you?* Teal said *Its nothing…..* then Dorothy said back *I know you too well, so level with me please. And say what is eating you!* Teal said *Your still very ducky as ever Dorothy* and Dorothy said *Yes, that is also true lets head for my place to talk* (Narrator: Dorothy is teals best friend, in the town that she lives in. Dorothy’s father runs everything like a business man of the sort. That is why he is able to give Dorothy some really ritzy cloths to wear.) Dorothy and Teal started to make their way to her house.

 Teal said as they walked *Dorothy I do hope that you don’t plan to become a gold digger, because the glad rags that you wear.* Then Dorothy said back *That’s baloney! That will never happen my dear tomato friend.* they have both been together since they were kids and both of them knew each other well. Teal and Dorothy finally got to the house or more like it is a residential house. This house is full of a lot of rooms hallways and more. Dorothy opened the door and said *Mother, father I’m back home with a special guest.* Her parents came around from the corner saying *Goodness me is that Teal?* that is what her father said. And the mother said *Oh my, look how you have grown. Look at the gams that you have now. * she said that in a happy tone of voice. Teal greeted them saying *Hello Mr and Mrs Williams. Long-time no see.* Dorothy’s father said *Indeed* then Dorothy’s mother said *I sense that you two need to talk about something* And Teal said *Ab-so-lute-ly* and then she replied back saying *Get a wiggle on then, up to Dorothy’s room. I’ll bring up some snacks for you.* And Dorothy said *Thanks mum.* Dorothy and Teal went up the stairs to the room. They both found a place to sit down teal was at lock in thinking at this time. So Dorothy snapped her out of it saying *Teal!* Teal rose up like a rocket and she replied back in shock saying *Yes Dorothy?!* Dorothy asked *Teal what’s on your mind? Or what are you planning to do with your life?* Teal turned away and said *I…I just don’t know….I want to help my mother’s life, to help her have a better life. I was also thinking if going on an adventure will help in any other way* Then a knocking came from the door, and the door opened. It was Dorothy’s mother, in her hand she had a plate filled with cookies and milk. And she said *Here you go my lovelies!* *Thanks mum* said Dorothy then she thought for a moment.

Before her mother left the room she called out *Mum!!!! Wait!* then her mother turned around and said *What’s the matter dear?* then Dorothy explained. Her mother went into thinking and said *I think…..your father may be able to help you two.* Teal and Dorothy followed her to the living room. There, Dorothy’s father had his nose in the newspaper. The mother said *Dear Teal needs help…..* he glanced up for a bit then his head went down and continued on reading, and ignoring what she said. The said again *Darling this is an important matter!!!* then he looked up again and folded his newspaper and he said *Honey…..I thought that I told you that I don’t want to be disturbed while I read the news paper.* and she said *Sorry but, you really need to tend to Teal….* The he asked *What is eating you up my dear?* Teal explained to him then he said *Hmm…….just before your father died he gave me something for you. He said not to give it to teal until the time is right* and he continued on saying *Teal sit down please it is about time to do dig up something important from the past, to do with your father…….*

I won't summon anyone who did reply to my previous thread, because of the spam. So you know yourselves as you asked me to make another chapter for this story. I hope you enjoyed it. Chapter 3 will be coming soon. ^-^
Hello, its been a while since I have released another chapter for this story. I am really sorry for the hold up to those who have read the first chapter. I have a lot going on right now as it won't come in yet. I'll let you know when things will be fine. This story is really hard to do as I chose to make an interesting one, to draw people in to read. I hope that you like the next chapter. Its a bit short but I promise it will get longer in words.



The Girl Who Went Through Dramatic, Changes In Her Life Chapter 2


Teal and her mother left the cemetery. There was no talking at that point. Both of them were in deep thinking, and thinking about how they will better their lives. Then Teals mother finally spoke, after a long time saying “Teal I know how all of this is hard for you……I believe there is something out there for you to adventure on. Why don’t you visit that tomato friend of yours? Maybe that will cheer you up. Now are you sure that you don’t want some dough?” “It’s copacetic mum, and no I don’t want any dough.” said Teal. Teal and her mother got back to town and onto the steam train, to get back home. Teal thought to herself “Mum is right maybe I should see a couple of my friends.” The journey didn’t take that long as they got back home. Teal saw a tomato figure person that looked familiar. It was her friend that she saw in town. Teals mother urge her to go and see her friend and she said “See you later at home have a whoopee time!”  Teal nodded her head and she called out “Hey Dorothy!” Dorothy turned around and her face brightened up. She replied back saying “Teal!!!!” Dorothy ran to where she was and gave her a big hug. Teal said to her * Your looking a live wire as usual, and spiffy as well. I forgot that you wear ritzy clothes*then Dorothy said *You slay me, that’s sad but, true.* Teal started to feel even more sad then Dorothy asked *Teal what’s eating you?* Teal said *Its nothing…..* then Dorothy said back *I know you too well, so level with me please. And say what is eating you!* Teal said *Your still very ducky as ever Dorothy* and Dorothy said *Yes, that is also true lets head for my place to talk* (Narrator: Dorothy is teals best friend, in the town that she lives in. Dorothy’s father runs everything like a business man of the sort. That is why he is able to give Dorothy some really ritzy cloths to wear.) Dorothy and Teal started to make their way to her house.

 Teal said as they walked *Dorothy I do hope that you don’t plan to become a gold digger, because the glad rags that you wear.* Then Dorothy said back *That’s baloney! That will never happen my dear tomato friend.* they have both been together since they were kids and both of them knew each other well. Teal and Dorothy finally got to the house or more like it is a residential house. This house is full of a lot of rooms hallways and more. Dorothy opened the door and said *Mother, father I’m back home with a special guest.* Her parents came around from the corner saying *Goodness me is that Teal?* that is what her father said. And the mother said *Oh my, look how you have grown. Look at the gams that you have now. * she said that in a happy tone of voice. Teal greeted them saying *Hello Mr and Mrs Williams. Long-time no see.* Dorothy’s father said *Indeed* then Dorothy’s mother said *I sense that you two need to talk about something* And Teal said *Ab-so-lute-ly* and then she replied back saying *Get a wiggle on then, up to Dorothy’s room. I’ll bring up some snacks for you.* And Dorothy said *Thanks mum.* Dorothy and Teal went up the stairs to the room. They both found a place to sit down teal was at lock in thinking at this time. So Dorothy snapped her out of it saying *Teal!* Teal rose up like a rocket and she replied back in shock saying *Yes Dorothy?!* Dorothy asked *Teal what’s on your mind? Or what are you planning to do with your life?* Teal turned away and said *I…I just don’t know….I want to help my mother’s life, to help her have a better life. I was also thinking if going on an adventure will help in any other way* Then a knocking came from the door, and the door opened. It was Dorothy’s mother, in her hand she had a plate filled with cookies and milk. And she said *Here you go my lovelies!* *Thanks mum* said Dorothy then she thought for a moment.

Before her mother left the room she called out *Mum!!!! Wait!* then her mother turned around and said *What’s the matter dear?* then Dorothy explained. Her mother went into thinking and said *I think…..your father may be able to help you two.* Teal and Dorothy followed her to the living room. There, Dorothy’s father had his nose in the newspaper. The mother said *Dear Teal needs help…..* he glanced up for a bit then his head went down and continued on reading, and ignoring what she said. The said again *Darling this is an important matter!!!* then he looked up again and folded his newspaper and he said *Honey…..I thought that I told you that I don’t want to be disturbed while I read the news paper.* and she said *Sorry but, you really need to tend to Teal….* The he asked *What is eating you up my dear?* Teal explained to him then he said *Hmm…….just before your father died he gave me something for you. He said not to give it to teal until the time is right* and he continued on saying *Teal sit down please it is about time to do dig up something important from the past, to do with your father…….*

I won't summon anyone who did reply to my previous thread, because of the spam. So you know yourselves as you asked me to make another chapter for this story. I hope you enjoyed it. Chapter 3 will be coming soon. ^-^
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