I'm sure that everyday people live in this struggle/Like a puzzle, what does it take for us to prove we love you?/Hopes, dreams, memories and trust all diminished/No time to get replenished, so we think our lives're finished/ I'm just a guy that's the primary and secondary/Like a secretary, but all this fame's unnecessary/I'm a survivor looking for needs of respiration/All the desperation turns to self determination/My career truly began at the start of 9th grade/Since I rapped to these people, they thought I had it made/But one day, I learned something horrible 'bout  fate/ That's when my love for these people turned into hate/My brother said that most of people will make fun of me/They're done with me; I'm giving them ammunition to gun for me/ I wouldn't realize that sooner, I'm never the same/I'll never play this game cause my feelings went and changed/Now at school, I look at them like they weren't there/Staring at the darkness and hate in the air, but I don't care/My school friends lied to me; they weren't true to their words/There were exceptions, but  I didn't say a word, it's absurd/In class, not everything or everyone looked as they seemed/But in other means, I'm looking for that girl of my dreams/I feel so stressed out, yet I'm on a vacation/A lot of time to focus on this self determination/Living without freedom of speech would be a nightmare/So I'm scared; what's standing on my neck is my hair/That's just a risk I'm not willing to take/It isn't great to watch society drown in hate/Look at the news stories so you'll know what's happened now/People think they know it all, but they don't know how/To fix it; we don't know that we're the ones who did it/Took that long to realize cause other times, we missed it/Forget it, that's just another thing we couldn't fathom/We couldn't detect it like I can't detect sarcasm/People notice that and use it like their ammunition/To keep humiliating me is like their only mission/Well, excuse me for being so darn oblivious/And excuse you for acting very mysterious/ I'm guessing this depression is a new-found experience/Just hearing this won't make your eyes and ears oblivious/Rapping to random people knocked a few screws loose/I just did it for entertainment; there was no time to choose/ Feels like everyone is using the Jedi Mind Trick/But now I know what's up so don't act slick/Now my inner self will start to reprimand me/ It's almost as if these people couldn't stand me/I'm tired of these people, especially the liars/ I'll see then down below when they're burned through the fires
  Like that, y'all...   P.S: When I said "these people", I meant the people at my school, not you guys. I love you guys like the brothers and sisters I never had. 

Beat Used: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2b6jI5egT8g
Til next time, peace...

That is quite a poem there, brilliant. Can't wait for more

i like the beat to it and its a really in depth poem keep at it, cant wait for your next one either fun to read along to it hehe

That was pretty good. Using a poem to express yourself at what life at school is to you. I like it. I'll read more.