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03-04-06 11:58 PM
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[color=black][font=Arial]Well, it seems my other topic was deleted or something 'cause I can't find it, oh well, here are some of my poems I wrote.

-The Truth© - Wrote this for English
-Perdido/Lost© - In Memory of my brother
-Illusions© - I wrote it off the top of my head today =|

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[center]
[size=4]The Truth[/size]

Never will I know how to get close to you
Never will I know if this love is true
Even though you know me
Never will you know the truth about me

Tell how to overcome these feelings
Tell me how to fight this eating me
Will you ever look this way?
Or do I have to go away?

Look at me, I beg!
I’m about to twist my leg!
My heart aches to express myself.
Even though I left my courage on the shelf

You may never know how I feel
You are my Achilles’ heel.
You are the reason I’m about to kneel
Let’s end this poem before I make it real.[/center]

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[center][size=4]Perdido [/size]

Tus lagrimas son la lluvia calmante
Formando un rio sobre tus mejillas
Encendiendo al sol con su alumbrante furia
Pero no cegando a los ojos creyentes

Volando con gracia superior
Soplando sus agonias sobre el campo despojado

Buscando tu casa, el piso mas alto, el nivel olvidado
Donde tu familia y amigos descansan sin saber

Sobre el oceano brillante
Sobre las montañas desafiantes
Buscas tu lugar en este mundo
Buscas la razon del porque permanecer aqui

Nunca pares de buscarlo, aguila blanca
Nunca pares de creer en tu perdonable creador

Yes...It's in spanish I know...My best poems come in Spanish..I'm Colombian, ok?!
Please review it ^^

This translates to:

[size=4] Lost [/size]

Your tears are the calming rain
Forming rivers one your cheeks
Brightening the sun with your lighting fury
But, you don't blind the believing eyes

Flying with superior grace
Blowing your agonies over the open plain

Looking for your house, the highest floor, the forgotten level
Where your family and friends rest without knowing

Over the brilliant ocean
Over the defying mountains
You search for your place in this world
You search for the reason for being here

Don't stop searching, white eagle
Don't stop to believe in your forgiving creator[/center]

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[center][size=4]Illusions[/size]

Through the dark clouds
Underneath the cloud of rain
I can see your glowing face
Smiling at me with such love
Such grace
That overwhelms me with joy

Stretching my arms to you
My fingers reaching to touch your face
My toes tipping to grab you

Though, as I closen
You fade from my eyes
Once again to leave me to my anguish
To my loneliness

As I lay here, on the wet pavement
I ask myself: "How could I?"
"What compelled me to believe you?"

So, once again, I standto my feet
Leaving this place of illusions
Following this path of solitude.[/center][/font]
[color=black][font=Arial]Well, it seems my other topic was deleted or something 'cause I can't find it, oh well, here are some of my poems I wrote.

-The Truth© - Wrote this for English
-Perdido/Lost© - In Memory of my brother
-Illusions© - I wrote it off the top of my head today =|

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[center]
[size=4]The Truth[/size]

Never will I know how to get close to you
Never will I know if this love is true
Even though you know me
Never will you know the truth about me

Tell how to overcome these feelings
Tell me how to fight this eating me
Will you ever look this way?
Or do I have to go away?

Look at me, I beg!
I’m about to twist my leg!
My heart aches to express myself.
Even though I left my courage on the shelf

You may never know how I feel
You are my Achilles’ heel.
You are the reason I’m about to kneel
Let’s end this poem before I make it real.[/center]

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[center][size=4]Perdido [/size]

Tus lagrimas son la lluvia calmante
Formando un rio sobre tus mejillas
Encendiendo al sol con su alumbrante furia
Pero no cegando a los ojos creyentes

Volando con gracia superior
Soplando sus agonias sobre el campo despojado

Buscando tu casa, el piso mas alto, el nivel olvidado
Donde tu familia y amigos descansan sin saber

Sobre el oceano brillante
Sobre las montañas desafiantes
Buscas tu lugar en este mundo
Buscas la razon del porque permanecer aqui

Nunca pares de buscarlo, aguila blanca
Nunca pares de creer en tu perdonable creador

Yes...It's in spanish I know...My best poems come in Spanish..I'm Colombian, ok?!
Please review it ^^

This translates to:

[size=4] Lost [/size]

Your tears are the calming rain
Forming rivers one your cheeks
Brightening the sun with your lighting fury
But, you don't blind the believing eyes

Flying with superior grace
Blowing your agonies over the open plain

Looking for your house, the highest floor, the forgotten level
Where your family and friends rest without knowing

Over the brilliant ocean
Over the defying mountains
You search for your place in this world
You search for the reason for being here

Don't stop searching, white eagle
Don't stop to believe in your forgiving creator[/center]

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

[center][size=4]Illusions[/size]

Through the dark clouds
Underneath the cloud of rain
I can see your glowing face
Smiling at me with such love
Such grace
That overwhelms me with joy

Stretching my arms to you
My fingers reaching to touch your face
My toes tipping to grab you

Though, as I closen
You fade from my eyes
Once again to leave me to my anguish
To my loneliness

As I lay here, on the wet pavement
I ask myself: "How could I?"
"What compelled me to believe you?"

So, once again, I standto my feet
Leaving this place of illusions
Following this path of solitude.[/center][/font]
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Wow, I'm amazed... Thats all really good... Sounds like something you would read out of a book... great brotha!
Wow, I'm amazed... Thats all really good... Sounds like something you would read out of a book... great brotha!
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